Lets have some diljale type shayri....... 

Humne khuda se dua maangi,
dua mein apni maut maangi,
khuda ne kaha:use kya doon jisne dua mein teri lambi umar maangi

kuch khwab khwab reh jaate hai
kuch sapne adhure reh jaate hai
chahat ka wada wafa ki kasmein
kagaz pe chand tehrerein reh jaati hai
tujhse milna tujhe paane ki aarzoo
kuch khwahishein hasratein reh jaati hai
tere saath bita waqt tere sang guzre lamhe
maazi k faqt yaadein reh jaati hai.
                      

Howz it?                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

Its great.. There is one from my side:

Raat huyi jab shaam ke baad,teri yaad aayi har baat ke baad,
maine chup rehkar bhi dekha,teri awaaz aayi har saans ke baad

 

 

pehli 3 lines bht achi hai

anuradha

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Anuradha Sehgal

Falak Ke Teer Ka Kya Nishana Tha
Idhar Mera Ghar, Udhar Uska Aaashiyana Tha
Puhunch Rahi Thi Kinare Pe Kashti-E-Umeed
Usi Waqt Is Tofaan Ko Bhi Yahaan Aana Tha
Kalam uthai hai lafs nahi milta,
jisko dhund rahe hai wo shaks nahi milta,
firte hai wo zamane ki talash me,
bus hamare liye he unhe waqt nahi milta

Teri Yaad Nain Kiyaa  Fikerre Jahaan se Azaad,

 Tere Gham Ki Inaayat Khudaa Khair Kare

 

Cheers

Jo bewafa hai wo mera imtihan kya lega

Jo bewafa hai wo mera imtihan kya lega

nazar nazar  se milegi to sir zhuka lega,

use chirag jalane ke liye na kahiye,

wo nadan hai apni ungliyan jala lega!

 

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Ajay Arora

http://www.roots2india.com ( Indian community )
http://www.primeyards.com ( real estate india )

Bujhaa Detaa Hoon Chiraag Sham Hote Hi,
Ek Dil Hee Kaafi Hai Teri Yaad Main Jalne Ke Waaste.

 How's That

good ajay!! keep it up.

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Anuradha Sehgal

Shukriya shukriy, Ye khak saar is inayat ki nazar ek sher or karta hai, mulayza farmaiye mohtarma..

 arz hai......

Bujhe chirag ki tarah hamare sitare hain,

Kya gam hi naseeb mein hamare hain?

Tair rahe hain thak kar bhi,

isi ummed mein ke dariyae gham ke bhi kahin kinaare hain,

 

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Ajay Arora

http://www.roots2india.com ( Indian community )
http://www.primeyards.com ( real estate india )

Surkh Shaadi Ka Jodaa Pehan Kar, Sirf Choomah Tha Usne Mere Kafan Ko
Surkh Shaadi Ka Jodaa Pehan Kar, Sirf Choomah Tha Usne Mere Kafan Ko,

Bus Usi Din Se Ye Jannat Ki Hoorain, Bus Usi Din Se Ye Jannat Ki Hoorain
Mujhko Dulhaa Bannaye Huee Hain

Aasu ko aankhon ki dehliz par laya na karo,
Aapne dil ka hal kisiko bataya na karo,
Log muthi mein namak liye goom rahe hai,
Apne zakhm kisiko bataya na karo.

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Aankhe kholun to chehra uska ho,
Aankhe band karu to sapna uska ho,
mar bhi jaau to koi gam nahi, Agar...
kafan ke badle dupatta uska ho!

Pee hai sharab har gali har mehkhane se,

ek dosti si ho gai hai sharab ke jam se,

gujre hai hum kuch aise mukam se ki nafarat si ho gai

mohabbat ke naam se.

Kitne Aziyat Say Usne Mujh Ko Bhulaya Ho ga...
Meri Yadoon Ne Use Khub Rulaya Ho Ga..
Baat Be-Baat Aankh Uss Ki Jo Chalki Hoo Gi.......
Uss Ne Chehray Ko Bazuoon Main Chupaya Ho Ga
Soocha Hoo Ga Uss Ne Din Main Kaye Baar Mujhe.......
Naam Hathele Par Bhi Likh Likh Kay Mitaya Ho Ga...
Jahan Us Ne Mera Ziker Suna Hoo Ga Kisi Say..
Uss Ki Aankhoon Main Koe Aansoo Tu Aya Hoo Ga..
Raat Kay Bheegnay Tak Neend Na Aye Ho gi Tujhy....... .
Tuu Ne Takeeye Ko Bhi Senay Say Lagaya Ho ga..
Hoo Kay Nidhal mere Yadoon Say Tuu Nay Jana........ .
Mere Tasveer Pay Sar Apna Tikaya Hoo Ga......
Poocha Hoo Ga Jo Kisi Nay Tere Halat Ka Sabab....
Tuu Ne Batoon Main Khub Us Say Chupaya Ho Ga....

Kya baat hai janab??????????/

Great.........